BurntToastOwU's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[VIRUS ALERT]

Looks like its made in 2013. Beautiful

[Alastors & Adam's Fight In A Nutshell]

Fine animation, and funny idea. I do have a few notes if you want to read this up.

The timing at the start is kinda off-putting, I'd try making the timing of him throwing his hand back a bit more constant.
The transition between the windup for the slap, and the tentacle attack feels too sudden. I'd add a transition frame during the windup, that reveals the tentacle, before it goes into the side view.

tigerladiexx responds:

This is probably because I dont use a proper animation program, I basically drew the pictures and lined them up with the audio in Cute Cut, I dont know how the frames per seconds work or how you would line that up to an audio. Thanks for the feeedbackk..

[SAY HELLO TO DICK]

hi dick

[Go kitty go kitty]

yes

[Short Madness combat animation]

good animation, should probably merge the cigar to the box in the beginning, but nonetheless great

MiyukoNakayoshi responds:

I made the cigar bounce on purpose

[soft tacos]

P e r f e c t

[A Canadian joke]

gives heavy 2010 vibes

[Hank's Day Off]

Comedy gold

[I'm Gus]

that's sus

[I'm Gus 2]

that's kinda sus